Pitch Evaluation
Strengths
Is that we all had something to say and do some of us more than others but we still worked hard on out plot and took time to think about the things we had instead of what we didn't have and how we can use those resources to make our film good. Another strength was that we each had individual jobs for example i had the job of thinking of the types of themes that were linked in each of the films that i watched. Afsana job was to think about the plot and ow we could make it better for example a better ending to our original one. Selim's job was to think about what the characters would wear and have as props in the actual film. Also Selim also offered to use the camera and film the production which was another one of our strengths since we was already looking ahead of who's doing what job and how.
Another strength was that we all had ideas for a plot and sort of collaborated them all together to make it even better so we never actually used our own individual plots we mixed them together to make it even better to any of the plots that we had come up with before.
Also another strength that we had was that we listened to each others ideas and let everyone talk freely. Another strength that we had was that we all seemed to like the fact we were all working together and it was easier to get our ideas across.
Weaknesses
The weaknesses that we faced as group that not everyone pulled their weight in the actual making of the presentation. Also in the feedback that we got we needed to be more detailed in our work, for example we could have mentioned the moral of the story which is one of the things that we forgot to mention. Another weakness that my group faced was that we didn't go though each slide in the depth that we could have because i think we were all so nervous that we tried to rush it, so for improvement we could try to be more confident in the presentation.
Another one of our weaknesses is that it took us longer to come up with ideas for our short film for example the plot, the title which is still a working progress, and locations that we will be filming in and the people that we will be casting which is also still a working progress. Also what people realized from our pitch is that one of the people in our group wasn't saying as much and didn't participate with pitching the idea. Also another weakness that happened was that we were all nervous especially me when we was going in front of everyone this may be because our presentation wasn't as strong as some of the others. Since we didn't really talk about the audience in more depth and we told the audience what our influences are but we didn't really talk about the movies in depth and what there about exactly.
Below is the link to our pitch
https://youtu.be/sJgJmWtM3aA
Below is the link to our pitch feedback
https://youtu.be/vkyYFZ9H0l8
The weaknesses that we faced as group that not everyone pulled their weight in the actual making of the presentation. Also in the feedback that we got we needed to be more detailed in our work, for example we could have mentioned the moral of the story which is one of the things that we forgot to mention. Another weakness that my group faced was that we didn't go though each slide in the depth that we could have because i think we were all so nervous that we tried to rush it, so for improvement we could try to be more confident in the presentation.
Another one of our weaknesses is that it took us longer to come up with ideas for our short film for example the plot, the title which is still a working progress, and locations that we will be filming in and the people that we will be casting which is also still a working progress. Also what people realized from our pitch is that one of the people in our group wasn't saying as much and didn't participate with pitching the idea. Also another weakness that happened was that we were all nervous especially me when we was going in front of everyone this may be because our presentation wasn't as strong as some of the others. Since we didn't really talk about the audience in more depth and we told the audience what our influences are but we didn't really talk about the movies in depth and what there about exactly.
Below is the link to our pitch
https://youtu.be/sJgJmWtM3aA
Below is the link to our pitch feedback
https://youtu.be/vkyYFZ9H0l8
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